------------------------------------------------------------------ Hello and happy summer to you all!
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Anyhoo, your ol' pal Arielle here with a new comic! ... Correction: SEMI-SMUT for all of you sluts... That I love. I drew this comic for a special project (You'll see soon) and because I wanted to poke fun at the Green Day fandom and all of its untamed, sensual horny-ness lol.
Face it: as fans, none of us can resist a good kiss between our boys-- Whether it be Beej and Mike [link] , Tre and Beej [link] , Or Mike and Tre [link] (Couldn't find actual photo lol). ... Plus, some of you bug me to make slash, so here ya go.
Anyhoo, enjoy! I'll be back again soon! Y'ALL COME BACK NOW.
HEEHEE My first time giving a critique here! :3 Since you requested that, hun~
(Whoops I really never thought whats IMPACT.. what is it?? Lol i'll just put 5 XD)
SOOOO I'm really liking this one here! Tre's expressions are hilarious, and very cartoony! You're really good at drawing facial expressions and pretty much everything!
What I'd like to see is a different texture, you know the background to be reminiscent of an old, 50's comic! All scrappy and brown ish xD That'd be cool! Since the style you usually draw in is very old school-y comic/cartoon style which I adore!
Another thing that left me and could leave another newbie fan ( well i'm not newbie but i dont always know everything about their stuff lol) a bit confused is why Tre kissed BJ for that? XD
So maybe it should of been made a bit more clear for butts like me why that made tre to kiss him lol
I feel like I missed the main joke/pun xDD
BUT i gotta say Tre's face in the 3rd panel is my freaking favorite!!!! I could stare at it forever<3
I hope this helped. I always have my own opinions but I dont usually critique others because my opinions might be blunt :c I don't want to hurt anybody. Of course I wont lie either and say Oh it's awesome if it isnt in my opinion..
THAT.......HAS.........GOT........TO...........BE.........THE ............BEST THING THAT'S HAPPENED IN A LONG ASS TIME!!!! I love it so much when Green Day makes out with each other! Seriously, Green Day art has been down lately and it almost always the same old stuff, but you brought it back! Yaaaaaay! I love what you've done to Billie's hair and I love how you keep Tre's randomness as fresh! Your comics are always a privilege to read and explode from laughs! I know it's so cliched to have the top rating all across the board, but I don't care! This is pure gold for the sexually frustrated Green Day fan girl!
love the classic comic look of it, and the facial expressions/detail (but crack etc) &&& the whole reason behind the piece, well written comic, glad to see you're back on here again!
(Whoops I really never thought whats IMPACT.. what is it?? Lol i'll just put 5 XD)
SOOOO I'm really liking this one here! Tre's expressions are hilarious, and very cartoony! You're really good at drawing facial expressions and pretty much everything!
What I'd like to see is a different texture, you know the background to be reminiscent of an old, 50's comic! All scrappy and brown ish xD That'd be cool! Since the style you usually draw in is very old school-y comic/cartoon style which I adore!
Another thing that left me and could leave another newbie fan ( well i'm not newbie but i dont always know everything about their stuff lol) a bit confused is why Tre kissed BJ for that? XD
So maybe it should of been made a bit more clear for butts like me why that made tre to kiss him lol
I feel like I missed the main joke/pun xDD
BUT i gotta say Tre's face in the 3rd panel is my freaking favorite!!!! I could stare at it forever<3
I hope this helped. I always have my own opinions but I dont usually critique others because my opinions might be blunt :c I don't want to hurt anybody. Of course I wont lie either and say Oh it's awesome if it isnt in my opinion..
But this, this was brilliant! Keep it coming!
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